Bian’s Tale – Revenge – second part

Here is the fourteenth episode of Bian’s Tale; the second part of Section 6 – ‘Revenge’.

Not really a cliffhanger this time. Medium length. It’s taken me all week to write these two chapters and I’m still not very happy with them.

If you’re just arriving here, and haven’t read from the start of this serial, here’s a link to the beginning: https://henwick.wordpress.com/2017/11/17/bians-tale-innocence/

As before… You may have already seen the changes to the feeds in Facebook. If you enjoy my posts, please LIKE the Bite Back page and/or FOLLOW or FRIEND me on my personal page.

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I will be starting a Group, but I need some time to think about it.

Feedback always valued, folks. 🙂

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This episode from Bian’s Tale 1 – The Harvest of Lies has been removed.
The book will be available shortly on Amazon.

 

Bian’s Tale – Revenge – first part

Here is the thirteenth episode of Bian’s Tale; the first part of Section 6 – ‘Revenge’.

Mid length, but I sincerely regret, ending on a cliffhanger again.

If you’re just arriving here, and haven’t read from the start of this serial, here’s a link to the beginning: https://henwick.wordpress.com/2017/11/17/bians-tale-innocence/

You may have already seen the changes to the feeds in Facebook, as mentioned last week. If you enjoy my posts, please LIKE the Bite Back page and/or FOLLOW or FRIEND me on my personal page.

I will be starting a Group, but I need some time to think about it.

Feedback always valued, folks.  🙂

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This episode from Bian’s Tale 1 – The Harvest of Lies has been removed.
The book will be available shortly on Amazon.

 

Bian’s Tale – Darkness Falls – last part

Here is the twelfth episode of Bian’s Tale; the fifth part of Section 5 – ‘Darkness Falls’.

Short and, I regret, ending on a cliffhanger. Mwah hahaha.

If you’re just arriving here, and haven’t read from the start of this serial, here’s a link to the beginning: https://henwick.wordpress.com/2017/11/17/bians-tale-innocence/

Business stuff:

Please do read my other post on the Bite Back facebook page. Facebook is changing to ensure that the only ‘business’ posts (which would include posts from the Bite Back page) that you see in your feed are going to be paid-for advertising. I am not going to pay Facebook every time I post something, so you may miss out on posts in the future.

 

You may want to consider some steps to mitigate this:

(1) ‘LIKE’ the Bite Back page anyway

(2) ‘FOLLOW’ my personal page, because I generally copy Bite Back posts there

(3) If you haven’t already, message me your email address to be added to my book alert list. I only use this list for new book announcements.

 

What will I be doing differently?

I *may* start a newsletter, probably with other authors, if there’s an interest.

I will be moving any new serials to Wattpad.

 

Feedback folks. 🙂 On the changes and on the story…

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This episode from Bian’s Tale 1 – The Harvest of Lies has been removed.
The book will be available shortly on Amazon.

 

Bian’s Tale – Darkness Falls – fourth part

Here is the eleventh episode of Bian’s Tale; the fourth part of Section 5 – ‘Darkness Falls’. (There are only a couple of chapters left of this section, but this seemed a good break point).

The impression I was trying to build of Qingzhao was uncertainty. Up to this section Bian is not sure Qingzhao likes her & the woman is hard to read. We’ll see.

Bian’s been rescued from her attackers in Cholon, but she must go on, back to Saigon, and persuade Riossi to find Nhung, whatever the cost to her…

Feedback folks. 🙂

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This episode from Bian’s Tale 1 – The Harvest of Lies has been removed.
The book will be available shortly on Amazon.