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Game of Threads

THIS CONTAINS SOME SPOILERS FOR THE STORY UP TO THE END OF WILD CARD

A fan of the series, Gallandro, posted a list of questions as a comment underneath the recent Clippings post. This has been hugely useful to me to hear which threads a reader has at the ‘front of mind’.

I thought it would be better to make a separate post about the list to answer. It’s turned into a huge post, my apologies. But I’m delighted to field these questions and it keeps my mind straight on the world building!

Gallandro is in favor of some slower scenes which will allow me to wrap up (or move on) some of the many threads I have in the text. This is an important point. Once a thread is up and running, it usually needs a section of dialogue or exposition to move it forward. There’s nothing wrong with that, but my editor is not so keen on scenes that slow the story down unless they’re relevant to the arc of the novel where they occur. All of the threads which are unresolved are, by definition, arc threads rather than novel threads.

Now, many of these threads are significant to the plot of the series or the next book or two, so much of what I’m going to be saying is in the realm of ‘teaser’ rather than ‘spoiler’ for the books going forward.

1. Did Amber’s recent eukori mingling with her kin allow her to re-center on “good” feeding?

Yes, sort of, but that isn’t the end of the issue by a mile.

Even long established Panethus Athanate can slip, and it’s so easy to fall down that slope. Amber’s problem here is complex. What kind of Athanate infused her and how much influence will that have on how she turns out? She spent two years completely outside of Athanate supervision and fighting the infusion, will that have a positive or negative effect? She’s inadvertently fed on Jen’s fear and despair. (That wasn’t strictly a feeding, but close enough that a senior Adept, Ken Weaver, thought it was). Will that influence her? And Panethus Athanate behavior is all about control, while Were is all about instinct – the wolf enjoys being a predator. Will her Were side nudge her the wrong way?

And while the use of eukori heightens the sensations, and allows you to experience another’s emotions, it does not necessarily influence you positively. For instance, the worst of Basilikos use eukori to enjoy the fear and despair of their Blood slaves.

Lots more in Cool Hand.

2. Is Diana going to come back into the picture and help Amber soon?

Amber’s instinct (and the advice from Alice Emerson, Adept to the former Warders) is to trust only Diana to help with her finely balanced crusis and mental state. But Diana’s disappeared.

Cool Hand progresses this.

3. Will the Athanate nature continue to force Amber into relationships of both sexes or was it something particular to Jen that she focused on? I can’t imagine that it is easy to write in any more kin relationships but is this set in stone or will her changing nature continue to ask for more kin?

I could write a whole book on relationships and reasons!

The prevailing theory in Panethus is that an Athanate requires about three or four kin for a stable, healthy, long term relationship. That’s based on pure pragmatism. Kin benefit from the Athanate relationship with enormously improved health, but their bodies still need time to recover from providing Blood. Having four partners for an Athanate spreads the load. The theory also suggests that the kin group should be grown slowly, and the relationship between a Mentor and an Aspirant is designed partly to ensure this. The benefit of growing the kin group slowly comes when one of them eventually dies, the others are alive and able to provide support to their surviving kin and their Athanate.

However… Amber can barely get her head around Jen and Alex being kin. She’s certainly not looking for any more. (And yes, there are underlying reasons for the attractions and the speed of them, both Alex and Jen).

On the general point… gender is irrelevant to the process of providing Blood, and yet hugely relevant to Aspirants because of the pleasure involved. With everything else going on during crusis, Mentors do not want Aspirants stressing about how their sexuality might be affected by becoming Athanate. A good Mentor will not challenge an Aspirant’s sexuality during crusis. And yet, as Athanate develop, they begin to feel a sense of isolation and dislocation from human society and mores, and they begin to feel more identification with Athanate society, where gender is largely irrelevant. There’s no sense that Athanate are forced into relationships with both sexes, and no particular pattern to how they end up, other than older Athanate from Western societies are more likely to have kin-couples of mixed sex. This is partly because those couples would have looked more ordinary to the human society they lived in, and partly because new kin would usually have felt more comfortable in this configuration.

Now Amber is unusual in all sorts of ways. She’s short-circuited the main crusis process and as of the end of Wild Card she would be termed ‘anomalous late crusis’. Athanate theory is that Alex can’t provide Blood for Amber, so she really only has Jen when the Blood thirst hits (in Cool Hand). However, she’s also House Farrell, which nominally entitles her to the Blood of any kin within her House. She’s specifically asked Pia to create a Charter for the House which removes that entitlement, but…

Could she get enough emotional sustenance from Alex and Jen, and enough Blood from Jen and the rest of her House? We will have to wait and see…

4. Melissa’s death has yet to really be dealt with. How will it affect everyone? Will we ever know just how Dr. Nobel lured her out and did he imitate someone to frame them in any way? Will the pack need to make any recompense to Amber for her loss?

Melissa was part of House Farrell, though not anyone’s kin and not bitten. The whole House feels her loss. All witnesses to the way Noble lured her out of the house are dead, but we can assume he took the form of Morales. He would not have been able to be convincing up close, but enough to get her out onto the street.

Despite Amber’s adoption of Melissa, Altau would not formally have regarded Melissa as part of House Farrell. It hasn’t occurred to Amber to take it up with the pack. She doesn’t feel it’s explicitly their fault or responsibility. She’s actually more down on herself for not being quicker to solve the case or put in safeguards that would have prevented this.

5. Just what did Tullah’s parents do when Amber ran over there? Was her breakdown helpful/harmful to Hana (wolf spirit guide)? It seems Hana is her Adept spirit guide but then what are Tara and Speaks-to-Wolves?

It was Kaothos who acted, and what she did was actually render Amber unconscious. In the short term, this feels as beneficial as sleep. In the long term, what Amber’s missing out on is the mental activity of sleep. This is where the brain internalizes the events of the day, and also, for Athanate, the progression of becoming Athanate. More in Cool Hand.

Knocking Amber out doesn’t harm Hana, but the channeling of the immense amount of energy to blow up the factory at Longmont certainly did.

Tara and Speaks-to-Wolves are spirits. Or are they? Keep tuned.

6. Is Amber still in good standing with the Denver PD? Will Ops 4-10 be released from military service? How many Nagas remain after the Denver operation and did they all bug out for Matlal/Baliskos? Was Peterson captured and will the superior officer be identified? Was the 4-10 group able to save any documents and will they release these to the FBI or keep them themselves?

Morales is currently on Amber’s side. However, the Captain’s good standing is looking shakier as he seems unable to control the outbreaks of lethal ‘gang violence’ (Mykayla’s apartment, Longmont, Cherry Creek etc. etc.) that have erupted in the city…

The army has disbanded both the Ops 4 groups and the associated Obs team.

Ops 4-10 and Ops 4-16 (the Nagas) were both ‘short’ battalions, of about 500 people each. The majority of the Nagas survive and have left the country. There are warrants for the arrest of many of them and that will increase as the case unfolds.

Remember Noble left a dead-man’s switch of documents with a lawyer exposing what he knew of the Nagas. Between that and the documents that Colonel Laine provides, the operational levels of the Nagas will be exposed.

There is an arrest warrant for Petersen, but he was not captured. The ultimate head of the Nagas within the DoD has not been uncovered.

There are no legal proceedings against the former Ops 4-10 troops. More in Cool Hand.

7. The former Matlal vamps and toru are still in the city but were seen speaking to Gray? Will that be a problem and just how much longer will House Farrell have before she either needs to produce them or kill them?

Cool Hand. Yes, it’s a problem. 🙂

8. I don’t think Amber got back in contact with her Mom was she aware of the allegations of her being crazy?

In Cool Hand. At the end of Wild Card, Stacy was informed that Kath had Amber committed for her own good, but had no idea what that entailed.

9. Did Amber’s sister Kath successfully get her declared mentally incompetent and will that spell trouble for her business/life?

Yes and no. Nothing Kath managed to do has a lasting effect on Amber’s business. The declaration, without Noble’s presence to confirm it, will be thrown out by Jen’s lawyers. The committal to the ‘Max’, the maximum security mental hospital, was in a false name, so there’s nothing to concern us there.

The ongoing effect of Kath’s behavior on Amber’s life…wait and see.

10. Will Amber ever have time to meet with Pia and David to work on Athanate skills and review the House rules/duties?

Pia has been compiling a House Charter and a document which Amber thinks of as “How to be an Athanate 101”, and Amber’s been reading it when she can. She knows quite a lot, but it’s book knowledge, without context. When Pia writes something like “When meeting, Athanate from different associated Houses might as a courtesy offer the Blood of their kin”, you can imagine Amber has more questions.

Amber is going to continue to make mistakes and challenge rules in the whole paranormal community. I am getting some feedback from one beta reader that there’s got to be a limit to the perpetual mistakes, despite how convenient it is for writing purposes. 🙂

11. Now that Amber has become a wolf and felt the pack call is there anything else she needs to know about being a were?

Lots. She’s only grasped the core of how the Were and the Athanate work.

12. What happened with the charm bracelet that Tullah had given Amber back in the earlier books and is its design similarities to the necklace significant?

Amber still wears the bracelet, and as hinted, the working is sort of integrating with her senses. She’s more alert (when she’s not asleep on her feet) to threats. She doesn’t particularly trust the bracelet for the sort of reasons she’s mentioned in the text.

Adepts’ ‘workings’ and ‘the energy’ are topics which will be explored much more in Cool Hand.

There are similarities between the bracelet and the necklace (the one purported to have been used by Speaks-to-Wolves in rituals that helped the Were change). Both are more from the shamanic side of Adept capabilities, and visually they are both Arapaho bead jewelry. How they do what they do, and what they do… Cool Hand.

13. Did Olivia’s marque change and will that help her with her first shift at all, like the change in David’s marque allowed him better control of his Athanate side?

David received a massive infusion of Amber’s Blood which abruptly changed his marque curtailed his crusis. I’m not sure, in the short term, it could have been said to allow him better control. In the longer term, he is certainly a well-adjusted Athanate. David and Pia’s marque however, is Amber’s from before she started to become an Athanate-Were hybrid. None of them have any idea how David will react when he and Amber exchange Blood now, and his marque moves to match hers. Will he go through another sort of crusis and become a hybrid like Amber? Skylur and Diana are very old, established Athanate, and their marque will not change from exchanging Blood with Amber. Pia and Bian are a bit in between. They’ve both been Athanate for 100 years and have some control over their marque. Bian will be able to remain Altau should she chose to do so. Pia will want her marque to change to exactly match Amber, but does that mean she’ll become hybrid? Alex is a dominant Were, but will he become hybrid if Amber bites him?

Olivia hasn’t been bitten. Her marque is drifting toward Amber’s. Would it help her werewolf change if Amber bit her? Would she want that?

Cool Hand takes some of these forward. Some of them more than others.

14.The question of Dragon Spirit guides to the Chinese obviously caused a stir but will Skylur pursue questioning of Amber over this issue? The Altau Adepts seemed also interested in this development will they be an issue?

The Empire of Heaven (which includes China) are more than just a little stirred up by Amber’s question. Skylur would like to come and find out what’s going on. Unfortunately, Altau’s position is precarious. Skylur’s formally expanded his domain to include USA and Canada, and has implied obliquely that he will claim Mexico as well. He hasn’t got the numbers of Athanate to secure that size of territory. Skylur’s position as head of Panethus and the Assembly will be hugely damaged if Basilikos can prove he can’t hold his domain, so guess what they’re trying?

Skylur wants a conversation with the Empire of Heaven that will, at the least, create an association between Panethus and the Empire. It is urgent and important, but he has to hold his domain first. In the longer term, given how difficult it is to start any meaningful dialogue with the Empire, he is (sort of) delighted to have an opening topic that the Empire wants to talk to him about.

This is background in Cool Hand and the foreground in book 5, and probably 6 as well.

The Altau Adepts are Alice Emerson and her colleague, former Adepts to the Warders, who appeared first in Hidden Trump at the Assembly. Alice is certainly committed to her new House, Altau. She’s aware of how wrong things can go if the Kaothos situation is mishandled.

15. What happened to the Warder organization in the US? Did the show of the secret brain-washing have any other effects on the security issues? Is this an Athanate ability or something cooked up in conjunction with the Naga’s and similar to the experiments done on Amber.

The Warder organization was effectively disbanded by Skylur. Unfortunately, that puts the basis of the Assembly at risk…

Brainwashing and compulsions. Both the Athanate, who call it compulsion, and the DoD, who call it Neurological Programming, have separately researched these topics. Athanate capabilities vary from House to House, and Vega Martine (Matlal’s former Diakon) has an ability which is exceptional.

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Clippings

When I submit my draft to Lauren, she gets the big red pen out for any passage that takes too much off the pace. I went through some of my writing from today and decided to make the cut myself.

I’ve been asked a couple of times to post examples of these clippings here. I’m usually reluctant because often I use them later, or they contain spoilers. Every now and then there might be a bit like today’s post which is (almost) pure atmosphere. I’ve kept a little bit of it in Cool Hand. It does have a meaning and a message, but it’s not really a spoiler, so here it is. If it’s popular, I’ll look for others.

Amber’s waiting for Felix to come down from the mountain behind Coykuti Ranch. She’s at the little cemetery behind the ranch house, where Felix’s wives and his son are buried. She’s talking to Martha, Felix’s sister, who wasn’t very talkative last time they met. Martha’s been clipping the hedge…

“Felix said he didn’t know why it’s called the tree of life,” I said, stroking my fingers through the leaves.
“That’s because he’s dumb,” she said. She took a brush and began to work gently on the headstones. I went around the semicircle of the hedge, picking up clippings that had gotten away and waiting for her to continue.
“Candy didn’t want headstones,” she said quietly after a while. “She planted the hedge, made it like it is; a mother’s arms reaching out to comfort. She wanted all the pack’s dead to be buried here, one on top of the other. No markers, because we’re all just pack in the end. And she wanted this tree.”
She sat back on her heels.
“You know, parts of the yew die and rot and feed the rest of it. It lives off itself. It makes itself new from all it has ever been. The pack’s like that. It’s all the things it’s ever done, all its loves and hates, all its desires and fears, all its triumphs and failures.”
I got goosebumps. I finished the circuit of the hedge and put all the bits I’d collected into the bags. Then I went over the Candy’s headstone. Martha had moved to the next, and I traced the fading dates with my fingers, like I’d done the first time I saw them.

“The pack gives and it takes away,” she said. “If it needs you, it feeds you. It needs Felix. He’s strong like an ox. But me? I’m just around, and I been around for a long time. That means I’m getting old for a werewolf.”

“Some just stop changing and die. Some take up dangerous sports until their reflexes let them down. Mostly, we start to listen to the wind and we hear the last call.”
“Come here,” she said and pointed up the hill. “Look over there, beneath the trees. Tell me what you sense.”
“It’s dark.”
“Go on. Feel. Smell. Just say the words as they come to you.”
“The wind from there, it’s colder.” I drank the scents in, rich and sharp. The more I concentrated, the more I could untangle them. “There’s hot dust, cool pine, dry timber, wet earth.”
“More! Smell it. Taste it.” Her fingers were like claws in my arm.
“Earth. It’s slow. It’s cold. It’s full of life. Just…paused.”
“Yes. Cold earth. All still, underneath. It seems to us that life bleeds away into the earth, but that’s nature’s trick. You never die, but you’re gathered up. Like the yew feeds on itself, the pack remembers and you never die.”
“Now, close your eyes, and listen. Listen with your whole heart.”
Silence that had form and movement, nebulous as cloud, came rolling down the hill.
My eukori reached and blended with the Call and stretched and stretched, thinner and thinner.
“Listen!”
Trembling. Something just beyond my reach. Sighing – singing; there were words on the wind. Too soft, too faint to understand.
She shook me and my eyes snapped open.
I was leaning into the hill. I’d forgotten to breathe.
“That’s where I’ll go,” she said. “I’ll follow the song. Next winter or the next or in ten years’ time. Who knows? I’ll go to my wolf and I’ll run and run until I’m so tired I can’t run any more. Then I’ll lay down beneath the open sky and rest. And by and by, I’ll be part of that song.”

 

August end-of-month with / mit English and / und Deutsch

Sales Numbers

Raw Deal  19738
Sleight of Hand  20390
Hidden Trump  14579
Wild Card 5536

Die verborgene Hand 578

Small, steady selling. Nothing to blog about!

Marketing

As per my report in one of the previous blogs, I reduced the price of SoH to $0.99 for a week and got BookGorilla to include it in their daily email posting. I reported the numbers in the week, so I’ll just say that there were some slightly higher sales after the end of the promotion, but the effect dies away quickly.

I did get a slight boost (I think) from Susan Illene promoting Darkness Haunts. Why should that help my sales? Because the two series are associated in the ‘also read’ linkage in Amazon, and it’s entirely possible that people coming in to Susan’s series will also get recommendations for Bite Back.

Amazon knows the real reasons behind many of these sales questions, but they say nothing! 🙂

Promotion

I’m appearing in a podcast for http://bitterwithoutyou.com/ on September 21st. I’m not sure how I appear in a podcast, but anyway, I’ll be answering questions and reading a section of one of the books, or whatever they decide to do with me!

Deutsch

Die verborgene Hand :
Ein Leser hat eine Beschwerde. In dem DvH Buch spricht Werner im bayerischen Dialekt. Dieser Leser, sagt der bayerische Dialekt ist falsch.
Haben Sie es finden?
This is a short end-of-month report because writing is going well!