Bian’s Tale – Darkness Falls – second part
Here is the ninth episode of Bian’s Tale; the second part of Section 5 – ‘Darkness Falls’.
Bian must face what she will have to do to rescue her sister Nhung, as her existing problems mount and she uncovers new ones.
I may not post episodes over Christmas & New Year, but I *hope* that the completed novel will be with the beta readers and editor soon.
Feedback folks. 🙂
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This episode from Bian’s Tale 1 – The Harvest of Lies has been removed.
The book will be available shortly on Amazon.
Mark Henwick 
Its shaping up nicely. I totally called it. He, robbed her blind 🙂
Everybody around this young woman is tool. Except maybe the Chinese mob boss, and I’m not sure about him.
Anyway, a Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Yup, you got it.
I have you pretty much where I want you as a reader 🙂
Merry Christmas and a fulfilling 2018 to you and your family.
To be fair you foreshadowed the robbery enough that it should have been a good guess. excellent performance tearing apart her life one thread at a time.
One thread or two remaining, then it starts to get put back together 🙂
Merry Christmas 🤗
And to you, Justin!
I was away for the Christmas holiday and just now finished reading the previous chapter and now the current one. As expected, you are bringing the story along beautifully. My advise to Bian….Run! Riossi is danger! Her brother will bring heartbreak and her sister when found I haven’t decided yet. I am so looking forward to reading the rest of Bian’s Tale.
Thank you Dee.
Yes, we’d all tell her to run. Riossi is a serpent, but… how else are we going to rescue Nhung? Has Lanh become as heartless as he seems, or is it only when Thieu is watching?
I hoped you enjoyed your break over Christmas.
Thank you Mark…it was lovely. Got to spend time with the grandchildren. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with your family.