Bian’s Tale – Darkness Falls – second part

Here is the ninth episode of Bian’s Tale; the second part of Section 5 – ‘Darkness Falls’.

Bian must face what she will have to do to rescue her sister Nhung, as her existing problems mount and she uncovers new ones.

I may not post episodes over Christmas & New Year, but I *hope* that the completed novel will be with the beta readers and editor soon.

Feedback folks. 🙂

 

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This episode from Bian’s Tale 1 – The Harvest of Lies has been removed.
The book will be available shortly on Amazon.

 

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About Mark Henwick

I was born in Africa and left out in the sun too often. An early interest in philosophy and psychology was adequately exorcised by tending bars. And while trying to enroll in a class to read Science Fiction full time, I ended up taking an engineering degree which splendidly qualified me to move into marketing. That in turn spawned a late onset career in creative writing. When not working, I get high by the slightly less conventional means of a small light aircraft. My first book, 'Sleight of Hand' is available on Amazon at http://amzn.to/Sa0D3n

9 responses to “Bian’s Tale – Darkness Falls – second part”

  1. amper5andrew says :

    Its shaping up nicely. I totally called it. He, robbed her blind 🙂

    Everybody around this young woman is tool. Except maybe the Chinese mob boss, and I’m not sure about him.

    Anyway, a Merry Christmas to you and yours.

    • Mark Henwick says :

      Yup, you got it.

      I have you pretty much where I want you as a reader 🙂

      Merry Christmas and a fulfilling 2018 to you and your family.

  2. Justin Savely says :

    To be fair you foreshadowed the robbery enough that it should have been a good guess. excellent performance tearing apart her life one thread at a time.

  3. Justin says :

    Merry Christmas 🤗

  4. Dee DenBleyker says :

    I was away for the Christmas holiday and just now finished reading the previous chapter and now the current one. As expected, you are bringing the story along beautifully. My advise to Bian….Run! Riossi is danger! Her brother will bring heartbreak and her sister when found I haven’t decided yet. I am so looking forward to reading the rest of Bian’s Tale.

    • Mark Henwick says :

      Thank you Dee.

      Yes, we’d all tell her to run. Riossi is a serpent, but… how else are we going to rescue Nhung? Has Lanh become as heartless as he seems, or is it only when Thieu is watching?

      I hoped you enjoyed your break over Christmas.

      • Dee DenBleyker says :

        Thank you Mark…it was lovely. Got to spend time with the grandchildren. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with your family.

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