Bian’s Tale – Revenge – fifth part

Here is the seventeenth episode of Bian’s Tale; the fifth part of Section 6 – ‘Revenge’.

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This episode from Bian’s Tale 1 – The Harvest of Lies has been removed.
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About Mark Henwick

I was born in Africa and left out in the sun too often. An early interest in philosophy and psychology was adequately exorcised by tending bars. And while trying to enroll in a class to read Science Fiction full time, I ended up taking an engineering degree which splendidly qualified me to move into marketing. That in turn spawned a late onset career in creative writing. When not working, I get high by the slightly less conventional means of a small light aircraft. My first books are available on Amazon at

2 responses to “Bian’s Tale – Revenge – fifth part”

  1. amper5andrew says :

    Very good. I still think they deserve more, but her adopted father will probably see to that when he gets back from France.

    Nice cliffhanger 🙂

    • Mark Henwick says :

      Thanks Andrew.

      I teetered on the brink of having her go all out berserk against the Fontaudins, basically as the tangible representation of everything on the human side that had been against her, the focus of all that frustration and hate. It would have been cathartic.

      I’m happy with the way I arranged it in the end.

      We will hear very little more of the Fontaudins. A couple of lines in the next book and a final comment much later.

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