Bian’s Tale – Revenge – fourth part

Here is the sixteenth episode of Bian’s Tale; the fourth part of Section 6 – ‘Revenge’.

Unpleasant dialogue. My apologies.

If you’re just arriving here, and haven’t read from the start of this serial, here’s a link to the beginning: and each episode has a ‘next post’ at the bottom to take you to the next episode.

The story will stay up for a week or two after I complete it, and then, shortly after that, the final version with edits and amendments will be released on Amazon.

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I will be starting a Group as well this weekend.

Feedback always valued, folks. 🙂

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This episode from Bian’s Tale 1 – The Harvest of Lies has been removed.
The book will be available shortly on Amazon.


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About Mark Henwick

I was born in Africa and left out in the sun too often. An early interest in philosophy and psychology was adequately exorcised by tending bars. And while trying to enroll in a class to read Science Fiction full time, I ended up taking an engineering degree which splendidly qualified me to move into marketing. That in turn spawned a late onset career in creative writing. When not working, I get high by the slightly less conventional means of a small light aircraft. My first books are available on Amazon at

5 responses to “Bian’s Tale – Revenge – fourth part”

  1. Michelle Quickfall says :

    I’m waiting with bated breath for the next installment. Keep up the good work!

    • Mark Henwick says :

      Thank you Michelle! Quickly arriving at the last few scenes for this book, and as you can tell, there are tasks that will be incomplete – the first three books form a self-contained arc of a sort –

      The Harvest of Lies (this one)
      The Words of the Dead
      The Rise of the River (I may call this The Weight of Gold)

      As soon as this one is at the editors, I will be starting Bite Back 6. Then back to write The Words of the Dead. I just need to write faster. 🙂

  2. Justin Savely says :

    Yes write faster. I need to know if my guesswork is correct😁

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