Another couple of chapters, and I did some polishing on the first two, so here they all are together.
I’ve never written romance before (‘We can tell’ the shouts come in from the back).
Have I made it too much of an adventure to start with? Is it too technical, or not technical enough? Is the tech stuff that’s there easy to follow? Am I drawing pictures in your head? Have I held off what’s happened on the planet too long? Am I being too coy about the role of Dancing Mistress? Are you in Zara’s head? In her corner?
I hope you enjoy….
Your comments welcome as always.
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